I HATE ESSAYS. so help :)

<p>soo i have two essays due on friday. the question is to write about a challenge. I've had some trouble with this and i need someone to critique it, edit it, or just tell me if i should scrap the idea all together.
pm me please<3</p>

<p>thank you</p>

<p>Ill read it if you send it to me.</p>