<p>I created a beautiful common app essay and I love it, but when I wrote my Yale supplement essay, I ended up with a piece of writing that I hate. I love the topic and I love the ideas that I express, I just hate how I structured it and can't get it to flow more easily, especially since I'm already at 530 words. I need help with organization, anyone care to lend a hand?</p>
<p>I can give an honest try. PM me…</p>
<p>Ughhh, now I’m up to 600 words. This is impossible.</p>