<p>Does anybody want to critique my essay? I couldn't think of anything to write about, because I don't have passion (I am pretty apathetic). So I wrote this essay about the plight of the underweight (weird topic?). This is only a first draft.</p>
<p>I only have 1 day until my BU deadline. Any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>Anybody? I really need help here. Some other people thought my essay was actually good, but I need more opinions and criticism. I'll PM you the essay after you ask for it.</p>
<p>PM me (+chars)</p>
<p>PM me too.</p>
<p>I am underweight, and fine with it! PM me!</p>
<p>I'll read it..pm me</p>
<p>I'm a killer essay reader (ask the kids in my writing class)</p>
<p>PM me. i'll read.</p>
<p>sure, PM it to me. i love reading/giving feedback</p>
<p>i will. message me</p>
<p>i had salad for dinner. pm me.</p>
<p>Don't PM me. I just gained 15 pounds. Just hope the admissions officers that read your essay haven't either. Weight is a sensitive issue, and I'm sure it is to the underweight also, but I don't think the overweight (or average sized who gained 5 lbs over the holidays) would like to read about it. </p>
<p>Actually, I'm just in a bad mood. You should probably ignore me.</p>
<p>I really hope the adcoms don't have that reaction, raindrop. I guess my view is kinda risky...especially considering that a majority of Americans are overweight. But this essay is all I have, and it's due tomorrow, so I am rolling with it. </p>
<p>Thanks for the replies.</p>
<p>Does anybody else want to read/comment on it?</p>
<p>im rather skinny. ill read hahah.</p>
<p>PM me, i will read it.</p>