I have an essay, but I think its too corny--would anyone help edit!!

<p>The title basically says it all. If you message me I will send it to you. It is for the Tulane Personal Application, so it is only a 500 word essay. It is about my experience when I volunteered in Paraguay for 6 weeks.</p>

<p>Any more takers?? I would also appreciate if someone would mind telling me if I can use my essay for the common app–after reading of course</p>