<p>without once using the word "university" nor "chicago". Needs feedback; anyone want to read?</p>
<p>^ Why? Is it suppose to be like that? Hahaha, I guess it is…unique? But really, I would not send essays to people on this board, since there might be people seeking ideas or even wanting to copy your essay. Show it to friends and people you trust, not people on CC.</p>
<p>However, I am a hypocrit, because I let people here look at my Common App essay, but that was last year when I wrote it. :P</p>
<p>very interesting. I’ll give you some feedback on it, even though I think your strategy might backfire.
Not applying to UChicago.</p>
<p>If I were on the admissions committee…I would assume that you just had this generic “Why this school” essay, but of course that would quickly be proved false if you have things specific to the university of chicago. I guess I’d have to read.</p>