I HONESTLY need your help! Please! Please! Please! Please!

College Essays
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<p>I can't say please enough.....</p>

<p>I am so lost on my college essay! I have brought it to two counselors, both in my school. One told me it was probably the best she has read in her 19 year career, and the other told me it was...well, she just said a whole bunch of euphenisms that are vaguely equivalent to "it sucks."</p>

<p>So I'm looking for anyone who could give me some solid advice on my essay, other than grammatical mistakes (which I'm still hunting down). It's a pretty "unique" essay, and a bit more on the creative side, I suppose O_o</p>

<p>Thank you so much! <em>bows a thousand times</em></p>

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<p>pmmmmm but i'm 09.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. :)</p>

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<p>I'll definitely read it and comment! :)</p>

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<p>you're 14. no</p>

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<p>I'll comment for you..</p>

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<p>me too, I'm curious</p>

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<p>pm me.
i will read and comment</p>

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<p>Thank you! I will PM it nao~</p>

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<p>I'll take a look if you don't mind an '09er reading it.</p>

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<p>sure pm me or email me <a href="mailto:Yass1211@hotmail.com">Yass1211@hotmail.com</a></p>