I humbly ask for your help... Read my essays! (already submitted to Yale)

<p>If you would be so kind to read my essays (1 for commonapp + 1 for supplement)</p>

<p>and comment on them, it would be very much appreciated</p>

<p>I will decide on whether to send you the essay by looking at your previous posts, etc.</p>

<p>*I already submitted my essays to Yale SCEA, btw. I'm looking to improve them for the RD round. </p>

<p>Reply here and I will send them by PM. </p>

<p>Commonapp : ~600 words
Supplement : ~500 words</p>

<p>I’ll read! If you’d like to read mine, I’ll send it to you. But don’t feel obliged. :)</p>

<p>man, I wouldn’t send your essays on here. You don’t want the opinion of random strangers. I’m sure they’re fine, show them to people who you know and can trust in real life.</p>

<p>I am actually unsure if I have already helped you out or not, but I’ll offer my advice.</p>

<p>I’d like to help you out.</p>

<p>I’ll read it fellow Yale SCEA-er :D</p>

<p>if you PM it to me, I’ll read it.</p>

<p>if you want you can PM it over</p>

<p>If you PM me, I’d love to offer some feedback. :)</p>

<p>I’d love to help :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>Sure. I could read and comment.</p>

<p>I will read it</p>

<p>I’d be willing to give them a read.</p>

<p>I’ll read it! I’m decent with editing and such.</p>

<p>sure PM it</p>

<p>pm it! :slight_smile: and good luck</p>

<p>i have made a few changes to my essay, and will be sending you guys my essay within next week. </p>

<p>thank you guys! and I welcome any more readers</p>

<p>I can read for ya! Would you like to read mine?</p>

<p>I’m willing to read, though as a warning I am a 2015er. If it will inspire greater confidence I could send you my common app essay as well (already sent for my own EA school, UChicago).</p>