I JUST finished my essay! Wanna read?

College Essays
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<p>After months of failed attempts and multiple college essays, I've finally finished something I really like. While rough, I'd really like feedback from CC members who meet the following:</p>

<p>-You must pass my background check (lol)
-You MUST give feedback on my essay in a timely manner (asap, please!)
-I would like positive AND negative feedback-- what worked and what didn't?</p>

<p>I have a good feeling about this one..</p>

<p>POST IF YOU'D LIKE TO READ!</p>

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<p>I'd like to critique it. Pm it to me if I pass the background test.</p>

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<p>thanks, anyone else?</p>

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<p>PM me. like to read</p>

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<p>sure ill give it a look</p>

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<p>pm me! I'll read it :D</p>

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<p>thanks, any others?</p>

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<p>im happy to see it..pm me! :D</p>

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<p>I'm an editing b***h, I don't sugarcoat. Btw, what's your background check? LOL.</p>