I just finished my first draft, and i need some comments/advices!!!!!!

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my first draft of my essay
And I'm afraid it's boring
Can you guys give me some comments/advices
Just post here or PM and I'll PM my essay to you
thanks a lot :)</p>

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<p>I would like to help and review it PM me if you want:)</p>

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<p>glad to help. pm me if you want</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll give you my impression in 4 sentences or less.</p>

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<p>I can give it a go.</p>

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<p>thanks people
anyone else?</p>

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<p>you can pm me!</p>

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<p>PM me, kiddo!</p>

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<p>I’ll read, pm me</p>

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<p>PM me!!!</p>

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<p>I would be glad to read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it. Just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I would be glad to read- pm me please</p>

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<p>thanks you guys for your comments and advices
I am editing it and when i finish, i’ll send you back for further opinions
hope you don’t mind it
thanks alot</p>