I know this is last minute, but can someone help me read my Mt Holyoke essay?

<p>I know this is last minute but after looking at my essay, I'm scared that its more about myself than why I want to go to Mt Holyoke. I just need a third person advice about it so please help! Thanks!</p>

<p>hey Nelle</p>

<p>I got into MHC on ED so I can help you with your essay if youd like</p>

<p>My daughter got in last year, so I can help you as well.</p>