I need a very thorough critique and examination of my essay, please!

<p>I would like to know some people's general thoughts on it, what impression they get of me, what it says about me, and how it can be improved.</p>

<p>I'm not scared of people being mean-- it can only help me.</p>

<p>I can do this for you if you would like. Please include a prompt.</p>

<p>PM me your essay with the prompt and i’ll offer some feed back.</p>