I need chances and constructive criticism, so I can get into a school of my dreams!

<p>Hi guys, I am applying to Wharton, Columbia, Cornell, Dartmouth, Brown, NYU Stern, U Chicago, UC Berkeley, U of Michigan-Ann Arbor, MIT (for business school), and Carnegie Mellon. Haven't picked a safety yet, what do you guys reckon would be a good business school for safety?</p>

<p>SAT: 2070/1430 - am attempting another time because I always get 2250+ in practice tests
IB: Predicted 44 out of 45 comes to 4.0 UW and 4.95W because of rigor of course
SAT II: Math 2C: 800, Physics: 800</p>

<p>Extracurriculars:</p>

<ul>
<li>Founder/President of Revision Club</li>
<li>Founder/President of Guitar Club - one of the most successful student run clubs at the school with 25 people signing up within a day of registration</li>
<li>Member of Debating</li>
<li>Member of Model United Nations</li>
<li>Represented school in Golf tournaments (did this after playing for only 3 months - going to write my essay on this, showing how I put in effort and made it into the team with people who had 9 years of experience)</li>
<li>Started a proper and official business/company</li>
<li>Racked in approximately 200 hours of community service</li>
<li>2 consecutive years on student council</li>
<li>Built a cloud chamber, observing muon decay and cosmic ray collision (going to use such jargon on application to sound good haha)</li>
<li>Might build a mini particle collider in the near future</li>
<li>Helped my group of friends earn approximately USD1500 a year, for the past 5 years - annual thing</li>
</ul>

<p>Academic Distinctions and Honors:</p>

<ul>
<li>UKMT Gold Medal <a href="Approximately%20top%206%%20in%20the%20world">INTERNATIONAL</a></li>
<li>AMC12 4th in school [SCHOOL] or top 10% in world [INTERNATIONAL] (narrowly missed AIME</li>
<li>Sunlife Maths Scholarship competition top 30% in the world [INTERNATIONAL]</li>
<li>Member of Mensa International [INTERNATIONAL]</li>
<li>Only school candidate selected and attending GYLC [SCHOOL]</li>
<li>Euclid Maths Competition [INTERNATIONAL] - haven't taken yet but should easily win distinction and come at least in the top 20% in the world</li>
</ul>

<p>Employment Experience:</p>

<p>In the coming summer, I am definitely going to shadow a multimillionaire CEO for about 2 weeks, I may also get a student-teacher job at a relatively prestigious course for 8 weeks earning about 350 hours of community service. I, also, will work as a bartender with my friend for 2 weeks so as to get a different form of experience</p>

<p>Recommendations:</p>

<p>I have to submit 2 recommendations max. (school rule, don't ask why). I think my recommendations from my Physics teacher should be excellent. My spanish teachers recommendation will be absolutely amazing. The only problem in this section is that I am applying for a economics/business degree but I am not getting a rec from my econ teacher because his won't be as good as the other ones.</p>

<p>Essays:</p>

<p>I think I can write great essays and I have a very interesting and substance-filled topic to write about.</p>

<p>I am not applying for financial aid, and I will attempt the SAT I one more time in an attempt to get over 2200 at least. Also, I am an international student (Indian) if that makes a difference.</p>

<p>Thanks guys, I appreciate it a lot, and I will chance back to the best of my ability if you want.</p>

<p>Anyone that could care to chance me?</p>

<p>■■■■■. For sure.</p>

<p>You are overinflating your achievements way too much…</p>

<p>Top 30% in the world…wow.
And 4th in your school…double wow.</p>

<p>I am not a ■■■■■. Is over inflating bad because I was just trying to make it sound really good for the adcoms. Please I sincerely need some answers before apply in the coming fall.</p>

<p>anyone care to help me out?</p>