I need critiques for my common app short answer essay???

<p>Just finished my short answer for the common app. Pretty much a rough draft. I don't know if I really touched on all the points I should. Not sure if I just described my activity too much, or wrote prose too much. Who can read and give me feedback please!</p>

<p>Sure send it over. Give me the topic of it so i know what I’m reading about.</p>

<p>Thanks, PMing</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>bump 10char</p>