I need feedback on my Penn essay

[rd2012]

<p>I was wondering if any of you guys could help me edit my penn essay. thank you.</p>

[Snappy]

<p>Send it over if you want</p>

[Koharvard]

<p>sure! send it and i’ll do my best! :)</p>

[rudgnsdl]

<p>I’d be glad to help :)</p>

[pennforme]

<p>My son applied last year early and was admitted. Pretty familiar with what makes up a very good essay - especially Why Penn. I would be glad to review it and offer comments.</p>

[cuddlemecozy]

<p>i can! send it over :D</p>

[flyguy1688]

<p>sure, pm me.</p>

[IBprocrastinate]

<p>I can do it as well :)</p>

[Chriszeoli]

<p>Sure send it over</p>

[free2rhyme]

<p>I can read it if you want.</p>

[waitingforivy]

<p>Sure I could read it if you want</p>

[sauternety36]

<p>I can read it too if you’ll send it over! I’ll try my best.</p>

[Lagrange]

<p>If you PM me yours, I’ll PM you mine, I’d like some feedback too, if you don’t mind.</p>

[AaronBurr]

<p>send it over :)</p>

[hardworking21]

<p>PM me; I’ll take a look!</p>

[IheartPW]

<p>PM it to me =) I’ll put my thoughts into it~</p>

[JulianCal]

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

[Axel3419]

<p>Pm it to me. I’d be glad to give my honest feedback.</p>

[rchhay]

<p>I’ll read it! I’m not applying Penn, if that helps (Columbia ED!)</p>

[straciatella]

<p>PM me and I’ll give you my thoughts!</p>