<p>I just got my essay edited and I read it again. It actually didn't sound very good to me. So, I plan to rewrite the whole thing. I really want to write how the adoption of my baby sister and how my baby sister shaped my dreams. This topic was already hard to write about, so I might write about how my family traditions (filipino and chinese) shaped my dreams. Which topic sounds better? (1) Baby sister or (2) family traditions?</p>
<p>help anyone?</p>