I need guidance on my application essay

For obvious reasons, I will not be posting my essay online. I would, however, like to PM some of you with the first page of my essay and hear your thoughts. I’m not sure if I should scrap this idea completely and start fresh or continue with this essay.

A consolidated list of CC essay readers:

http://talk.qa.collegeconfidential.com/discussion/comment/22949160#Comment_22949160

Thanks

I recommend you ask an English teacher who you know and trust to read your essay.