I NEED HELP!! College Essay

<p>I just finished my common app essay and would really appreciate some constructive criticism or what I could do to improve it and avoid cliche essays! I want to apply to a competitive school and would like for anyone's tips! Please comment below your email address if you would like me to email it to you! Thanks :)</p>

<p>You can PM it to me if you’d like</p>

<p>Pm me !</p>

<p>I will definitely be glad to help out.</p>