<p>I'm really not sure I should use this essay at all, and I only have a few days left to decide. I need experienced readers who will give me honest feedback. It's a different essay, that's for sure. I would call it more of a narrative than anything, but I am so nervous about it. It would definitely make me stand out, but I'm not sure it would be in a good way. If I do choose to use it, it would be for my common app essay which would go to all of my schools (I don't think it really matters, but I am aiming quite high in terms of where I am applying). Help is enormously appreciated!</p>
<p><em>bump</em> :)</p>
<p>bump xx</p>
<p>Feel free to send it. I’ll probably comment more on content than on grammar mistakes, though I may point some out.</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>
<p>yeah i wanna read!</p>
<p>sure!!! can u read mine too??</p>
<p>Alright,I will read it…And Criticize!!!</p>