<p>I wrote two versions of basically the same essay and I need help deciding which one to send or if I should mesh them together.</p>
<p>bump? anyone?</p>
<p>If you trust me (yeah I am new and is applying to college too) I would love to take a look at your essays! just PM me or email me :)</p>
<p>Are you sure you’ll have enough time to finish in case you want to “mesh” them? I mean, I don’t know what they’re about, but it usually works when you combine certain elements of different essays into one. You can send it to me if you want, but keep in mind that I won’t go easy on you, so make sure you feel like you’ll have enough time.</p>
<p>Just be careful if you do decide to mesh them though! Sometimes it works fabulously, but other times (as is the case every time I try to combine two similar essays -.-) it ends up looking terrible because it’s choppy and jumps around between different places and writing styles.</p>
<p>I’d love to read it! PM me!</p>