I need help revising my essay

<p>Hello everyone, I am an international applicant, I would like to get some help. Can anyone of you revise my essays? please
I would be grateful.</p>

<p>Merry Christmas o all of you.
Dijaben</p>

<p>I’ll help you! I’ve been told im a good writer, so if you need assistance I can definitely provide that! Post it or we can exchange emails it that’s more comfortable with you.</p>