<p>I need people to give me a feedback on my college essay. I did common app prompt 1. Any help would be appreciated.
I need to decide in the next couple of hours to scrape this essay and start a new one. So your help would be greatly appreciated. :) </p>
<p>I can read it – PM me if you would like.</p>
<p>I will PM you the essay. </p>
<p>I can swap with you if you want :)</p>
<p>@pinkisking
I am rewrite a new essay. But can we swap tomorrow?? </p>
<p>sure thing! pm me tomorrow when youre done then</p>