I Need Help with my why penn essay.. (really fast)

<p>Can someone please read over and check my essay. I would really appreciate it. I just want to make sure I did not make any really bad grammar/ spelling errors. I also need help checking to see if my essay flows well. </p>

<p>TIA
CR</p>

<p>Yea, I can read your essay. I’m in the process of editing my own, so could you give me some feedback as well?</p>

<p>I’ve applied to all my schools! You can PM me. I don’t know a lot about UPenn, but I can help you with whatever you need.</p>

<p>I’m in the middle of watching Rocky Horror picture show, though. Haha, I might accidentally read you lyrics! :wink: jk</p>