<p>I'll PM it.
Also, I need it critiqued as well.</p>
<p>I would love to read yours 
Could you also read mine?</p>
<p>I can give you some feedback, PM me :)</p>
<p>I'll PM it.
Also, I need it critiqued as well.</p>
<p>I would love to read yours Could you also read mine?</p>
<p>I can give you some feedback, PM me :)</p>