I need my UC Essays Checked! (Transfer student)

<p>I've finished all 3 of my personal statement essays, had it checked once by a English professor this morning and have revised my essays based on his suggestions.</p>

<p>Can anyone give it a glance-over to see if I need to do anything else to it? Please??</p>

<p>yeah i'll take a look
pm it</p>

<p>Can I take a look at them.</p>