I need revision on my first UC #1 Essay!!

College Essays
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<p>It's my rough rough draft and short (379 words)</p>

<p>I am a terrible writer.. I think I have problems with grammer and the content.</p>

<p>Can anyone help me with my essay please??</p>

<p>The prompt is:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

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<p>go ahead and send it. <a href="mailto:sainanduri@gmail.com">sainanduri@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>hey ill read pm me</p>

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<p>i can have a try if you want</p>

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<p>i am free to revise.</p>

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<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>