I need serious readers to critique my UC PS#3

Applying to College
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<p>i need good editors who can edit my essay because i don't have anyone else who can do it and frankly its thanksgiving and it's too late for teachers to edit it :( anyone out there wanna help me out?</p>

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<p>anyone out there, cmon plz</p>

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<p>sure man, only if you liked it? if you do, ill read it.</p>

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<p>Ill look it at.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I'll help.</p>

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<p>sure........ill read it.</p>

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<p>i'll look at it</p>

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<p>If it's interesting, I'll critique it.</p>

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<p>hold on guys, lotta readers, its good, let me review from the first set of graders, then revise, then get back to u guys, :) thanks for all ur cooperation</p>

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<p>ill read too</p>

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<p>ill read just pm</p>

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<p>i'll read it also</p>