I need some feedback on Why Brown essay

<p>I guess the title gives it away. If any Brown students or soon to be ones could take a look and tell me what they think, it would be great. Thanks</p>

<p>so you know, i'm applying rd myself, my why brown essay is done though so i'll take a look, pm it</p>

<p>i'll read, my brown essay made my admissions counselor cry</p>

<p>ky9742 what did you write about that made the counselor to cry?</p>

<p>my topic was pretty ordinary (grandfather) but i think i wrote about it really personally and uniquely (it wasnt the why brown essay, just the personal statement)</p>

<p>Oh.. I though you meant that you made the counselor to cry with your you Brown essay... LOL... did you apply ED?</p>

<p>hey Ky9742, you have an admissions counselor? Isn't that really expensive? But yea, maybe you could pm me your email, cos it seems like your becoming my personal essay reader, :-D</p>

<p>I'm willing to help.. pm me if you like</p>

<p>i could read and give u feedback for it if u want.</p>

<p>you could pm me too</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>Oh I'm sry to hear about that Columbia thing ChenChen. Why didn't your stuff get there?</p>

<p>pm it here, but just let me empty my inbox first :)</p>

<p>Anyone wanna take a look at mine? Thanks.</p>

<p>I'll take a look...i got mine in today :)</p>

<p>lol colly ill take a look at urs and provide u feedback</p>

<p>i'll take a look...lol it's late and i have nothing else to do</p>

<p>I actually sent mine in today :(. Wish you guys offered yesterday but no worries, I think it does a decent job with the question.</p>

<p>can u look at mine then? lol if ur staying up?</p>

<p>sure ill help and give feedback i sent mine in last week, ill critique it ASAP</p>