<p>Hey guys, i finished my common app essay and i wanna know how to make it better (im not a very good writer). I chose the " impact of a significant event on you" topic. Any Takers??</p>
<p>I can take a look at it – send it to me and i’ll send it back w/ criticism within a day</p>
<p>ill take a look..pm me</p>
<p>I’ll critique it. PM me</p>
<p>bumpp. anyone else wanna read?</p>