I NEED some real Truthful Critque on my personal statement!

College Essays
1

<p>If anyone would love to help me on this harsh job! message me so I can give you the essay!</p>

2

<p>the prompt I am doing is the UC prompt #1
How does the world you come from shape you and your aspirations?
Thank you in Advance!</p>

3

<p>Did the UC’s submit their new essay prompts yet?</p>

4

<p>sure, I’ll read it. PM me</p>

5

<p>ill read it</p>

6

<p>Ill read and review, send it over</p>

7

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

8

<p>I will read it.</p>

9

<p>Send it to me and I’ll read it. I’ll let you read mine.</p>