i need someone to edit my essay plz!

Applying to College
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<p>hi everyone,
i am the first one in my family to ever apply to a 4 year and my parents do not anything about the process so i was wondering if anyone can help me edit my essay.
( i will e-mail it to you since its kind of personal)</p>

<p>THANK YOU SO MUCH in advance.</p>

<p>Rebecca</p>

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<p>I can help you since I already wrote essays and applied early to my first choice school.</p>

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<p>i can look too if you want multiple editors</p>

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<p>thank you so much, i will e-mail them to you both.
does anyone else want to read them? just let me know i would really appreciate it.</p>

<p>Beck</p>

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<p>i will read it :)</p>

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<p>me tooooooo.</p>

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<p>you can email it to me if u want!</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>I will read it; PM me (for some reason, my email rejects mail from cc members). Could you also read mine (for UCLA, UCI, and Cal)?</p>

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<p>i'll read it too.</p>

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<p>PM me. I'll help.</p>

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<p>i'll edit it</p>

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<p>hi if u want me to edit them i will-- i have edited mine like a thousand times and many of my friends have asked me to edit theirs...</p>