I need urgent help with my common app essay, anyone willing to guide/advise me?

Currently a senior, and basically I feel like my common app essay is not good enough. My writing lacks flow, the points are shallow, and it doesn’t help me stand out from other applicants. I’m even starting to think that my topic is trash and that I should change it.

My #1 school is Northeastern which do not require supplements, so I’m aiming to make my common app essay as strong as possible.

Could someone provide a second opinion? Please reply if you are willing too-- I will PM you, as I am in dire need of guidance. Thank you so, so much.

bump.

Go ahead and PM me I’ll take a look. I’m just a sophomore in college, but writing is a strong suit for me. @thesebajun