I really need feedback on hyp essay

College Essays
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<p>please read my revised essay.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look-- send me an email: <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

3

<p>I’ll take a look at it, PM me.</p>

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<p>Anyone else willing to read? Please?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it: <a href="mailto:fireflames81■■■■■■.com">fireflames81■■■■■■.com</a> </p>

<p>Not doing Harvard, Yale or Princeton. Just JHU.</p>