I rewrote my entire essay

<p>I decided to redo my Common App essay.
Just finished it. =)
I would like some feedback. Please PM me!</p>

<p>I'll give you feedback/comments/concerns.</p>

<p>pm me! (you can also read/critique mine if you'd like)</p>

<p>PM me. will give it a shot</p>

<p>Pm me, ill comment on it!</p>

<p>PM me, I'd like some feedback on mine too if you could.</p>

<p>thank you all. anyone else?</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>

<p>i'll critique it too</p>

<p>Thanks for the great feedback so far. I would like a couple more. Anyone? :)</p>

<p>Ill take a look. :)</p>

<p>Sure why not.</p>

<p>lol @ "sure why not."
:p</p>

<p>I'd love to</p>

<p>Lol what's so funny about "sure why not?"</p>

<p>ill read it just pm it to me</p>

<p>PM me -id love to read it and help out!</p>

<p>PM me, I will probably finish reading it tmr and send you some feedbacks.. This is my first time reading essays on CC, so I suppose I can give some original opinions</p>

<p>me too, ill read and critique and whatnot - do you want to read mine once im done?
just PM me and lemme know your msn</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>finally done with my supplements too =)</p>