<p>Quality writing and fluff are not the same. iHate’s writing is not “fluffy;” it’s creative and its subject substantive. Good novels are fun to read. If an essay resembles a good novel (in terms of quality), chances are it’s a good essay.</p>
<p>Takeaway: If this is for a personal statement that says “Tell me about yourself” or something to that effect, iHate, you’re on the right track.</p>
<p>Takeaway 2.0: To anyone reading this thread who hasn’t experienced this type of hardship, write about something of personal significance. This is not “better” or “worse” than someone else’s story. The point is to tell a good and truthful story about yourself. To quote redblue, write “something you care deeply about, make sure the grammar and punctuation are proper, and make sure your own voice comes through. It’s your opportunity to tell the AOs in your own words what you want them to know that your grades and SAT scores can’t. Then, hope for the best. Hope someone can see what you might bring and how you might contribute to their class.”</p>
<p>hth</p>