I think I went off topic, but I can't tell if I was able to pull it off...

Applying to College
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<p>I wrote my essay. I have no clue if it makes any sense because I went WAY off topic....I think. Can I please get some people to read it and give me some feedback on </p>

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<li>Does it fit the topic</li>
<li>Does it make sense in general</li>
<li>ANY comments on it/ improvements needed
4.Spelling and grammer-THIS I NEED LOTS OF HELP ON so if you see something wrong, don't hesitate to tell me about it</li>
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<p>I'll PM it to you</p>

<p>Thanks for any help!!! I really appreciate it</p>

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<p>bumping, is anyone willing to quickly read over it?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you PM it to me. :)</p>