i thought and wrote for 2 months, and i came up with this...

College Essays
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<p>does anyone want to read and critique my essay? ill pm it to you</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>

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<p>I, like you, worked on my essay for many months! I'd be happy to read it. Could you read mine as well? :D</p>

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<p>I'll critique it for ya, i worked on mine for months also!, wanna read mine as well?</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>I could make some critiques for you. just pm me and ill look over it when i have time.</p>

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<p>Wow wrote for 2 months? I'd love to read it.</p>

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<p>Just curious is reading other people essay a good idea ? or does it rob you mind of your personal creativity ? I am only half way through mine so should i read other people's essays ? </p>

<p>Regards,
Emaad</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll critique it for ya. PM me.</p>

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<p>EMAADS its good to read other people's essays because it kinda gives you an idea of what your essay should look like. but im not talking about reading any random person's essay, im talking about the example essays in essay help books, the really good ones.</p>

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<p>ill critique it</p>

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<p>I will read it and comment it.</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>Sure. PM me and I'll respond shortly?</p>

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<p>i will also be happy to give you feedback...</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>I will read.</p>

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<p>PM me, wanna take a look</p>

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<p>ill read it, pm me</p>

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<p>Ok PM it to me too and i'll see if i can offer any constructive criticism.</p>