<p>not even sure if what i wrote about can be counted as a local concern (or answers all parts of the question), but can someone read and tell me what they think? thanks</p>
<p>Sure. I can read it.</p>
<p>What's the essay prompt?</p>
<p>Discuss an issue of local concern. Why is this issue important to you? How do you think it should be addressed?</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM it.</p>
<p>Okay I'll read it and tell you what I think.</p>