Hi, I’m applying to multiple competitive schools with a low GPA, the essay is going to be a very important part of my application. In general the essay is about me learning stuff from others and me overcoming past struggles. I would really appreciate it if someone could have a look at it. It is the Common App essay and has a word limit of 650 (I know that I am going a bit over so could you also tell me where I can cut down would be much appreciated). Please shoot me a dm letting me know that you are willing to have a look at the essay and I’ll share it with you in google docs.
hey! i’m willing to read over it 
It would be better to ask a teacher to look at it rather than strangers on an internet forum. Whatever you do, DON’T send it to a user with only a few posts!
Ask an English teacher you know and trust to read over your essay.