i would LOVE you forever if you could read my essay :) :)

[mmarsha]

<p>i posted once before for help but only got one person who helped (thank you to that person so much btw) and am hoping to get some help/input/critiquing from anyone else--even if its harsh.</p>

<p>if you can help, please just comment here and i'll pm it to you</p>

<p>thanks so much!</p>

<p><3</p>

[AnIdealRevenge]

<p>Ill read it.</p>

[evil_asian_dictator]

<p>I'll give it a look.</p>

[mmarsha]

<p>an ideal revenge--thanks i pmed it!
evil<em>asian</em>dictator-i tried pmig it but it said your inbox is full</p>

[evil_asian_dictator]

<p>Send it now!!</p>

[yahooo]

<p>I'll read it and give some feedback</p>

[mmarsha]

<p>sent to you all :)</p>

<p>thanks so muchh</p>

<p>anyone else up for it?</p>

[shashi_13m]

<p>send!!! fast!!1</p>

[ladyspeedy]

<p>send it :)</p>

[Edwardz]

<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

[bannana_girl]

<p>send :).........</p>

[ivyracer]

<p>i'll read it!</p>

[KCSly]

<p>I'm in the critiqueing mood as well. Fire at will!</p>

[mmarsha]

<p>thanks so much everyone--i sent it to all of you :)</p>

<p>anyone else up for it?</p>

[olam36]

<p>Please send it, I'd be glad to give advice!</p>