<p>I would really appreciate if some of you wise =p adults would critique my essay. </p>
<p>I don't feel safe if I let other kids read it, so if anyone is interested, please PM me or post here. Thank you!</p>
<p>You can PM me, with your email address. It might be a couple of days before I respond. I agree that it is not wise, for several reasons, to have other students review your essays.</p>
<p>You may either PM me or just email me the essay. I have some extra time this weekend. :)</p>
<p>Any other takers?</p>
<p>Ok to send it to my via PM. Also, what schools do you think you'll be applying to?</p>
<p>You can PM me. Please let me know what schools you want to apply to and what your interests are.</p>
<p>I'm going to update the essay in a new draft and send it to you guys when I'm done. =p My top two schools are MIT and Brown by the way.</p>