I wrote a very honest essay about my very unique life - Good start/idea?

College Essays
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<p>I tried to be honest with myself when asking the question, "How am I unique and special?" and this was the result. It's a first draft. It is a good idea? Does it sound like a sob story?</p>

<p>UC prompt it was written to = describe the world you live in, how it has affected your dreams/aspirations</p>

<p>please PM me or post in the thread and I'll PM it. I think it should be at least mildly interesting.</p>

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<p>i'll read and help you edit it if you want. PM me=)</p>

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<p>oopsssssssssssss</p>

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<p>i'll take a shot at it. PM ME</p>

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<p>I would like to read as well. My UC essay is about my brothers, so no need to worry about any kind of stealing</p>

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<p>sure ill read</p>

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<p>i'd love to read it. my common app essay is kind of similar. trade? i'm 09, but not applying to UC, so you don't have to worry about stealing.</p>

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<p>pm me and i'll give u my opinon</p>

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<p>pm me and i can look it over.</p>