<p>Hi guys,</p>
<p>I’d really appreciate someone evaluating my Harvard essay. Post here and I’ll email it to you (assuming you’ve opted to allow emails in your profile). Alternatively, email me at Raven at ultraSW.com.</p>
<p>Thanks so much!</p>
<p>(The only reason I’m not posting it here is because it contains many “identifiable” elements.)</p>
<p>Also: I’d be happy to return the favor, if you like!</p>
<p>Raven, I'd be happy to read your essay...I THINK i can be of some help since I like to write lol...if you would like to read mine just tell me in the e-mail...thanks</p>
<p>email sent :)</p>
<p>hey raven, i'd love to read your essay.</p>
<p>thanks sucharita! e-mail sent! :D</p>
<p>Feel free to let me peruse over your essay if you wish.</p>
<p>Raven, please send</p>
<p>Thanks, Todd!</p>
<p>Raven, Me too!</p>
<p>HopeforFlowers - you have mail! :) The formatting came out pretty poorly though.. if you'd like to PM me your e-mail, I'd be happy to resend it...</p>
<p>Thanks again =)</p>
<p>raven001, I'd like to read it, if you don't mind.
Thanks!</p>
<p>send it over here, if u want great feedback</p>
<p>why are people so anxious to proof-read her essay? ...you'd think shes handing out e-candy by the looks of peoples responses :)</p>
<p>not that that's a bad thing ... just caught my attention lol</p>
<p>Hey, the board is a friendly place =)</p>
<p>The comments have been helpful thusfar, and more feedback is always welcome and appreciated!</p>
<p>PS<br>
<---- not a "her" :D</p>
<p>Hey raven!!</p>
<p>If you want I'll look over your essay!! I am not sure how much of a help I'll be but I can try!! Good luck!! :)</p>
<p>Im willing to take a look.</p>
<p>Collegeman.. you have mail
Ilovecollege- what's your e-mail?</p>
<p>Thanks guys :)</p>
<p>raven, I'll take a look</p>
<p>your essay is **** dude, you should rewrite it</p>
<p>i wanna read your essay!!! :)</p>