I'd appreciate some critical comments...

<p>...if anyone is willing to read my ~500 word essay about creativity and the beach. I think it may be a bit too descriptive or "flowery", but that's the way I naturally write. Thanks.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll give it a read if you’re willing to read my 500 word essay in exchange.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you would like-- email me with the essay as an attachment
<a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>