I'd love to hear your feedback

College Essays
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<p>Hey there, I just finished the 1st UC personal statement and would like to hear some open feedback.</p>

<p>If you have the time and patience, I'd love to hear from you</p>

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<p>Forgot to mention, it's the transfer prompt</p>

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<p>Bump 10 char</p>

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<p>Well if anyone has the time....</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you read mine. I'm not a transfer, BTW.</p>

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<p>Sure, pm me.</p>

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<p>I'm a transfer, and I'll read your if you read mine. :)</p>

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<p>Yawn, yeah just pm me.</p>