If I want to get a syllabus before class starts, would this be a good email to send?

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<p>Subject: [class name]</p>

<p>Hi [instructor's name],</p>

<p>If possible, could you please send me a copy of your syllabus? I would like to take [class name], but I am still uncertain if I will be able to this upcoming quarter.</p>

<p>Thank you,</p>

<p>[my name]</p>

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<p>Sure, go ahead. You may want to change the 2nd sentence to “I would like to take <class name=”“>, and am trying to figure out a way to fit it in for this upcoming quarter.”
…or something like that.</class></p>

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<p>lol I’m going to use this too. Might as well see what my fall quarter is going to be like.</p>

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