If somebody would like to read an essay...

College Essays
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<p>I have one. But I just kind of typed this up in a sudden burst of inspiration this morning. I have to go to work like right now, but I am really eager for someone to see this soon. So if anyone would like to look at it and tell me if it is at all moving (common app essay for Harvard, Columbia, Brown, Cornell, UMICH, UChicago..competitive schools) </p>

<p>Also, I did not proofread it...and it over 500 words. Like 100 words over 500 words. Yes your math is correct: it is 600 words. </p>

<p>I have already started on another essay so if this sucks feel free to tell me please. Thanks!</p>

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<p>What I need the most is a good ending. I have nothing. Also to shave words-at least 50- so if you can help me do that it would be great!</p>

<p>Any feedback is appreciated!</p>

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<p>I’d be willing to read it! I’ve had bursts of inspiration when drafting for college essays as well, so I know how that process can go :)</p>

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<p>I’d happy to help:)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give feedback…PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ve read quite a few harvard eessays that were accepted… I’ll read yours :slight_smile:
PM away</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give you feedback. Just PM it over.</p>

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<p>I’ll help :)! PM it over and I’ll get back to you ASAP!</p>