If this is what it takes to get in, I'm committed, but please critique!

<p>Haha, if your enthusiasm here is anything like it is in real life, you will do, MIT or no MIT/ Berekeley or no Berkeley.
Just keep working hard; I am impressed with your abilities.
Do not forget to consider other schools, and don’t become obsessed with a university, as it might be detrimental to your health and confidence were you not to get accepted. You’ll goto a good school for sure, and you’ll do awesome in life as well. Keep working hard, and if you need help making USAJMO, I can give you tips, just cus I like you kid.</p>