Just PM me your essay and I’ll read through it and leave some feedback/advice for y’all! Glad to help.
What’s your background? Are you qualified to offer advice?
I can’t thank you enough for the help! As I’m trying to redo parts of my essay, I’m feeling even better and better about it. I’ve been mulling over which essay to use for my common app, but your advice was extremely enlightening and I’m really starting to feel as though with lots of modification, this may be THE essay to use.