<p>So I wrote a common app essay, but Its really long (about 1100 words) which is like 2 pages single spaced. I think it rambles to much and I need to cut a bunch of it out. I need someone else's perspective of what is unnecessary, maybe its that its my own writing but I have this feeling that I need everything. SOMEONE HELP. I'm sending this essay to every college on my list so it HAS to be good. Please respond here if you can edit it for me! Preferably NO ONE who is an '09... I don't really want someone applying with the common app to jack my idea</p>
<p>Lets not be losers, someone man up and read my dank essay</p>
<p>if you can't find anyone else to read it who isn't 09 I can help. I'm 09 but i've already written/submitted my essay to common app and I had the exact same problem as you did (mine was about 1400 words before and i had to cut it to 900 words)</p>
<p>I'm 09 but I'm happy with my common app essay. I'm applying ED to Penn, so unless you're applying there, I can help.</p>
<p>Anyone else interested in helping out a bro? I need to get rolling before the ED/EA deadline! LEMME KNOW!?!?!</p>