<p>So I decided to scratch my previous essay about comparing myself to my friend who was afflicted with a disease, despite many hours of work, because anyone else could have written a similiar essay. It didn't really showcase me, so I started to write another essay. It's only halfway done, but I would appreciate an opinon on how it's coming along. For some reason, I feel it's too simple and not "Princeton" material. EDIT: and I'm not sure if I'm answering the prompt enough: Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way.</p>
<p>Please post if you would like to read my beginning and the rest of my outline! I would appreciate any comments. I can read through an essay for you, if you are a 2014er too and looking for last minute help like me.</p>